Mark Tomlinson
12-04-2007, 11:27 PM
There is a Wikipedia entry out there for the Venture One, but it is woefully out of date and incomplete. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Venture_one
Lets get in there and pump it up some.
The entry can use some history of the vehicle. The partner list is outdated. Each paragraph can be expanded into a section of it's own. And the specifications read like the vehicle is already being manufactured. There should be a section on design considerations, such as aerodynamics and safety. Would you believe that the entry doesn't even mention that the vehicle tilts? Ian, if your reading this, someone from Venture could supply official artwork. I'm thinking that a fan club reference wouldn't be a bad idea either.
Remember, Wikipedia is an encyclopedia - not advertising material (although pumping up it's Wikipedia entry would help with Google searches). So don't put in a lot of hyperbole and speculation. Just the facts.
Lots and lots of facts.
Lets get in there and pump it up some.
The entry can use some history of the vehicle. The partner list is outdated. Each paragraph can be expanded into a section of it's own. And the specifications read like the vehicle is already being manufactured. There should be a section on design considerations, such as aerodynamics and safety. Would you believe that the entry doesn't even mention that the vehicle tilts? Ian, if your reading this, someone from Venture could supply official artwork. I'm thinking that a fan club reference wouldn't be a bad idea either.
Remember, Wikipedia is an encyclopedia - not advertising material (although pumping up it's Wikipedia entry would help with Google searches). So don't put in a lot of hyperbole and speculation. Just the facts.
Lots and lots of facts.